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  • 2018 South Dakota State University - Masters Thesis on Foreskin Restoration

    "I Don't Want to Hear About Your Dick": Communicatively Managing Stigma Surrounding Foreskin Restoration

    -Joshua Hartelt
    South Dakota State University


    https://openprairie.sdstate.edu/cgi/...04&context=etd

    This document is nearly 100 pages and it secured its author a Master Science degree in the Communication Studies & Journalism progam.
    -Ron Low
    Service@TLCTugger.com
    847 414-1692 Chicago

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    Uh..........I tend to critique a piece (in whatever form it appears) not just on its merits regarding truth and insight, but also on its presentation. State college, right? If I was this guy's mentor I'd be swinging my red pencil like a weed whacker, 'cause there be a buncha weeds here. Typos, and worse yet, syntax errors. So many errors that I stopped reading it in the first minute. If you can't present your thesis in an acceptable form, then you lose.

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Reality View Post
      Typos, and worse yet, syntax errors. So many errors that I stopped reading it in the first minute.
      And for a master's degree in COMUUNICATIONS AND JOURNALISM no less. I've read master's theses for engineering written by English-as-a-second-language students with better communication and journalism skills.

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      • #4
        Originally posted by mattsprofile View Post

        And for a master's degree in COMUUNICATIONS AND JOURNALISM no less. I've read master's theses for engineering written by English-as-a-second-language students with better communication and journalism skills.
        Yep, the more I looked at it (and then stopped) I suspected it's bogus. There are decent State Colleges out there, and this is definitely NOT their standard.

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